A good format for individual submissions
1. Introduce yourself - Include any information about yourself that is relevant to the bill. This might include your family, life or work background that makes your opinion important.
2. Write your introduction - A few sentences to clearly state your position on the bill, and summarise your reasons.
3. Body of submission - The select committee wants to know why you think the way you do. What would the introduction of this legislation mean for you? What is at stake? You could use the reasons in your introduction as headings and write about each one. Or you could use specific clauses from the bill as headings and write about each of those.
4. Make recommendations - If you have any recommendations, list them clearly, even if you have mentioned or discussed them in the body of your submission.
5. Write a conclusion - A few sentences to restate your position on the bill and your reasons.